07 August 2011

Angel


The memories are difficult to forget, the helplessness difficult to explainA loss is never justifiable.
--

She rose above, with grace
She looked around with an elegance;
I saw this beautiful face.

I caught just a glimpse, a glance,
My heart, but leaped in dance.
Was it her or was it chance?

The radiance beat the midnight moon,
A sting passed through, a harpoon
the moment, I felt, had come too soon.



No words said, but yet heard,
Serene and silent, the moment passed
A thousand questions my mind asked.

She vanished into a haze,
Like the morning mist at the harsh suns gaze
Memories of her I cannot erase

A drop rolled down my cheek
Am I human enough to cry, so meek?
Where can I find those answers I seek?

Through the hue, I tried to pursue
I called out - "My dear, where are you?"
A lonely whisper, I heard - "in you..."

--
In remembrance of a dear old lady who lived down the lane.


18 Comments

18 Comments:

Ashwin S Kumar said...

My Gaaaaaaaaad !!!!!!!!!

Advy said...

loved it...

Advy said...

simply awesome (PERIOD)

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Appreciate it dude. Thanks.

Dattatreya said...

Too good Suman!

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Thanks Datta.

Balzi said...

Amazing.....

Ms. Raman said...

Your verses.. touching.. Your dedication.. heartfelt.. You rock Superman!

Anonymous said...

One of your best poems!
-Vineeth

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Thanks Balzi.

Thank you Ms Raman. Appreciate it.

Vineeth - Thanks dude.

Rohit Mohan said...

I think this is your best work till date, bud..Loved it!

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Thanks bro!

Srikanth said...

Too good Suman :)

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Thanks Srikanth!

Anonymous said...

Very nice poem!! I liked all your poems and stories but this one is amazing. I couldn't leave from here without appreciating!! and a big Congratulations!!!!
- Ambika Aunty

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Thanks Ambika aunty. Coming from you, this means a lot!

And thanks! :)

Xan said...

Man its good to see your poetic side. Wanting to see more of the poetry where this came from :).

Suman Sivachar said...

Thanks Xan!

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